Well, my WIP, Morphogenesis, is done, I've spent the last two months editing it, and it's about as good as I can make it without external feedback. I've edited things, added scenes, changed things, all sorts of stuff, but there are always errors, usually ones that your eyes just slip right past. Which is why I need some more eyes. Unfortunately, the hospital gets all bent out of shape when they catch you in the morgue with a bucket of eyeballs and a screwdriver, so I've come to y'all.

So, does anyone want to give me a hand by reading it over and giving me some feedback? It's full novel length, 67K words, and I have a litany of questions for afterwards, but I'm told it reads fast. I'm looking for feedback one everything, from typos to what you think of the whole story idea and everything in between.

So, any takers? I've got it in Word form, and I'm trying to beat Adobe into submission to make the pdf version.

Mokele

If your audience is high school/middle school i will read for stylistic things, and if it is adult, ill read with the critical eye. PM me, and i will give you my email. You can just email the whole text in the email, or attach it. I am an intelligent little person, so i dunno... but yes i am a taker.

If it helps any, Open Office has a "One Click" save to PDF. It's a free download and can do many things that MSoffice can't.

Also, if you haven't gotten the pdf thing figured out yet...

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I haven't tested it.

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I wish I could volunteer to help you out but I'm currently swamped with my own editing. If you don't find anyone though let me know.

If you are still needing someone to read it, I will.