Earn a full critique from FW

FIFTHWIND · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:08 pm Post subject: Earn a full critique from FW

Have a huge chapter or a piece that isn't getting the feedback you feel you deserve? I'd be happy to give you my undivided attention and heart-felt comments... for a price Twisted Evil

Any member who would like to see what a full editorial critique can look like is welcome to earn one.

PRICE: Recruit 2 new members, and offer a decent critique to a fellow member. Once both of these requirements are verified, let me know what piece you would like read and reviewed.

this is a standing offer to all members and it does not expire. Want 2 full critiques, then just meet the requirements again.

I, of course will still offer friendly advice here and there as I see fit. But these "new" critiques will be more thorough than you could have hoped for.

**FW gets his red pen ready...

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Grammer · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:12 pm Post subject:

Just pointing out: Why not get the bucket of red paint ready?

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Elune · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:39 pm Post subject:

hmm Good idea FW.

I'll volunteer my services as well for people who post at least one decent, well thought out critique to a fellow member and 2 award worthy posts in Writing Discussions.

Just send me a note when these requirements have been fulfilled.

Have fun!

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FIFTHWIND · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:41 pm Post subject:

Thank you Elune Very Happy

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Astri Veredus · Holder of the Key Joined: 14 Apr 2007 Posts: 761

Thraengorn has 2 already. Those being me, and Mitchel_is_stupid. Mitchell_Is_Stupid's computer hard drive recently crashed so.... yeah.

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FIFTHWIND · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:11 pm Post subject:

Sure, I'll consider making him the first to receive a good critique. He'll still have to offer a good critique himself to one of the deserving (or forgotten/lacking) members to fulfill the other requirement. (That should be the requirement for any other MODS that would like to offer this service... at least one GOOD critique to a fellow member)

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Astri Veredus · Holder of the Key Joined: 14 Apr 2007 Posts: 761

He's doing a full critique of the 28 pages i sent him... that counts right?

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FIFTHWIND · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:17 pm Post subject:

Only if those 28 pages and the critique are posted here Very Happy

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Astri Veredus · Holder of the Key Joined: 14 Apr 2007 Posts: 761

hmm... alright.

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Kuro · Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 10:28 pm Post subject:

Wonderful, now I have to find too more friends to drag in here Rolling Eyes

Just kidding. Hm, lets see who else I can get...

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