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modern-virtuoso Teller of Tales


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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 11:41 am Post subject: Modern-Virtuoso (Closer To One) |
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"CLOSER TO ONE"
 Target word count: 120k
 "Closer To One" is the story of Earth, 156 years in the future, in 2164. Twelve years before, an experiment gone wrong has caused the destruction of half the world, the remaining population forced below ground. Orphaned humans are implanted with a countdown ranking system. They are sent above ground for re-con, sabotage and combat against the quickly increasing numbers of creatures, now called Uriah. Every time someone in a higher ranked is killed, everyone below is moved up one, until they reach 0001. There are many rumors surrounding rank 0001 and no one has lasted more than a week in the position. They usually go down 2 per week. Lately there has been large disappearances of up to fifty people at a time.
This follows the tale of Corie Gradings, a girl who notices the rapid decline in numbers. She and her friend, Monk, watch as they gradually grow closer to 0001 and start to unravel the mystery about what really happened twelve years ago.
 I certainly am committed to this challenge and I encourage others to join. Hopefully I'll be able to meet my target and complete a novel! 350 a day is a great idea. Wish me luck! _________________
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Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 7:03 am Post subject: |
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Today's WC: 521
Total WC to date: 521
Currently working on: The introduction and prologue for events to come.
I pretty pleased with my writing. I slipped into the niche of creating something easier than I thought I would. As Fifth said, "hit the ground running". _________________
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modern-virtuoso Teller of Tales


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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 11:09 am Post subject: |
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Obviously I took my one day break on Monday to clear some thoughts.
But I'm back today!
Today's WC: 350 on the dot
Total WC to date: 871
Currently working on: The opening scene that sets the background layout and plot for the story.
I was happy with today's work. It was fast and the ideas flowed easily. Hopefully the same for tomorrow! _________________
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Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 10:15 am Post subject: |
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Today's WC: 357
Total WC to date: 1228
Currently working on: The end of the prologue and the start of Chapter One, twelve years in the future.
I went well today and I got it done faster than I thought I would. Yay! Every thing is progressing well  _________________
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:47 am Post subject: |
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Today's WC: 412
Total WC to date: 1640
Currently working on: Chapter One and the developing of the story's setting.
It was a bit of a push today to get the words out but it wasn't as bad that I felt myself at a complete block. I start my exams tomorrow so I think I'll find writing a little bit of a struggle for a while. But I'll keep at it!  _________________
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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Keep the faith MV, you've got talent and we believe in you.
Trust me, I know how hard it is to juggle all these things, but make writing your escape and outlet, and it will become addictive. _________________ The owl cried outside as I slept, dreaming of my own death.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 7:08 am Post subject: |
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Good advice there...
Writing is the beast you envision it to be. It can be ugly and mean, or it can be kind and gentle.
It's up to you how you relate to the task of sitting down to write. _________________ <b>---Ken Kiser </b>
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:02 pm Post subject: |
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Today's WC: 364
Total WC to date: 2004
Currently working on: Mission to the surface.
Like mornara and Fifth said, writing was definitely like my release away from exams. With the long weekend ahead, I'm hoping to get even more done  . _________________
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 12:43 am Post subject: |
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Argh! So sorry I forgot to update last night!
Today's WC: 350 again
Total WC to date: 2354
Currently working on: Surface battle
I did this writing in the morning and told myself I'd update it here at night, but then forgot  But it's here now! _________________
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 11:46 am Post subject: |
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Back with today's WC also!
Today's WC: 387
Total WC to date: 2741
Currently working on: Mission to the surface and some new characters.
I had the whole day to write, and it took me almost that to write it. Although, I was preoccupied too. It was a good days writing though. I could definitely put a little more detail into it than usual. _________________
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modern-virtuoso Teller of Tales


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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:46 am Post subject: |
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I keep writing but forgetting to update! This is Tuesdays. I think I will take every Monday off.
Today's WC: 423
Total WC to date: 3164
Currently working on:Second chapter and developing of major plot.
This was the last thing I did yesterday so I was pretty tired and stressed from exams. It was a good escape, except I fell asleep straight afterwards. _________________
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 10:23 am Post subject: |
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Argh! Forgot to update again!!
Here is for the 11th
Today's WC: 359
Total WC to date: 3523
Currently working on: Chapter Two.
It was some good writing and an easy target to make.
EDIT:
Now I will do tonight's worth!
Today's WC: 361
Total WC to date: 3882
Currently working on: The begining of the third chapter and the start of the countdown.
I just made the numbers tonight and I am happy where its heading. _________________
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Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 12:29 am Post subject: |
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Good luck, Modern! I'll be rooting for you.
I wish I had the guts or the drive to do something like this, but the fact is, I'm just not ready yet. But you are. So good on you!  _________________ "Through the window pane,
and the hole in my brain,
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modern-virtuoso Teller of Tales


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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:39 am Post subject: |
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Sorry! I went to my fathers over the weekend and his internet was down so here I am posting three days worth of writing.
Three day WC: 1082
Total WC to date: 4964 (wow thats really climbing)
Currently working on: The ending of Chapter Three
I finished the WC pretty quickly and I had the chance and time to go over a few details. All in all, a successful weekends writing. _________________
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Elanor Teller of Tales


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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:15 am Post subject: |
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Way to go!
And as long as you keep writing, we don't mind that much if you don't remember/aren't able to post everyday. Your total wordcount tells us that you're keeping it up anyway  |
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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 1:32 pm Post subject: |
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Modern,
yes things add up quickly. Just keep with the program. That almost 5000 words will quickly turn into 10000 then 20K and up. It is amazing what just a little time will do everyday. |
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modern-virtuoso Teller of Tales


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Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 7:23 am Post subject: |
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This is for the 17th & 18th combined.
Combined WC: 707
Total WC to date: 5671
Currently working on: Start of Chapter Four and the begining of the countdown.
I'm starting to do my writing late at night, last thing before bed and updating it the next day. I find that I can do a lot of writing at night, but I have to work it around my school work. _________________
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Posted: Mon Jun 23, 2008 7:27 am Post subject: |
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I seem to be putting up combined word counts. I hope no one minds.
Combined WC: 1054
Total WC to date: 6725
Currently working on: More developments of characters and plot.
I'm making more and more combined word count updates these days. I sill keep writing my 350 a day but I just get too tired to update. Well, better get back to writing! _________________
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Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 7:18 am Post subject: |
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Another Combined for four days..
Combined WC: 1462
Total WC to date: 8187
Currently working on: Major plot point.
It's been kind-of hard to rack up the words lately but that might be due to be attacking a difficult plot part. Holidays have graced me with time from now on, so hopefully i might push the word count up higher  _________________
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Wow there was a major gap between this and the last. But I kept writing! Hope you guys kept faith.
Combined WC: 3872
Total WC to date: 12,059
Currently working on: The end of Chapter Three and their discovery.
Since school holidays started, I've been up at my dads for the past week. Lack of internet made posting impossible but thankfully Word was still going. I've kept up the writing and hopefully have made the target. I bet one or two of you thought I was gone for good eh? I still write on! _________________
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Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:40 am Post subject: |
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Awesome dedication, Modern!  That 12,000 will turn into 50,000 before too long. _________________ "Through the window pane,
and the hole in my brain,
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 11:44 am Post subject: |
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Combined WC: 1753
Total WC to date: 13,814
Currently working on: The beginning of the action.
Well holidays are over and I've kept up the WC. Just, I might add. I thought I would be able to get a lot in but apparently not. Next semester of school starts tomorrow and my mind's going to be thoroughly engaged. But I will persist! Wish me luck  _________________
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 6:39 pm Post subject: |
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Good Luck.
There is time in ANY day for a tiny 350... you just might have to look harder to find it. _________________ <b>---Ken Kiser </b>
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:23 am Post subject: |
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Combined WC: 1,324
Total WC to date: 15,138
Currently working on: Chapter Five and the escape.
Writing has been swell, and really easy. Weekend's here so there's going to be even more! _________________
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Keep going Modern! _________________ The owl cried outside as I slept, dreaming of my own death.
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Combined WC: 2501
Total WC to date: 17,631
Currently working on: Their extraditement =]
I'm still at it!! _________________
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